Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Oakley's 100 word story.

The Creature from Below!

 Swimming ​slowly, gasping for air my lungs exploded like  gas from a bottle. The ‘thing’ had demolished the boat and had likely ​slaughtered my crew. Now it was my turn! My body ached as I gradually slipped into the green ​mist of the sea. My father’s voice still rang in my head like a church bell warning me to avoid the calm water. A sharp pain dancing​ in my chest as I slipped into unconsciousness. As I woke on the deserted shore a vision of the battle crept into my mind. Mermaids are like guardian angels!

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